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		<title>Feed back on my poem?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[. asked: i need some feed back and what to add next thanks
Bears
Bears bears they are brown
brown like the dirt on the ground
claws so sharp just like a knife
slashing at everything with all its might
big and round just like the sun
hunting fish like a net
roaring as loud as a whale
standing on its hind legs like [...]]]></description>
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Bears<br />
Bears bears they are brown<br />
brown like the dirt on the ground<br />
claws so sharp just like a knife<br />
slashing at everything with all its might<br />
big and round just like the sun<br />
hunting fish like a net<br />
roaring as loud as a whale<br />
standing on its hind legs like a dog<br />
climbing so high like a flying bee<br />
fur so thick like a chunk of wood<br />
tails are short like a bob tailed cat<br/><br/><a href='http://'>Content for WordPress</a></p>
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		<title>Help with this descriptive piece?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robert Harrison asked: Lamp lit sadness lit the pier with intermitting light and dark hollows.
The sea lapped at its wooden supports; like at dog at its water bowl.
A concrete walkway had replaced the old worn noisy timbers
A few weeks ago, even the top rails which ran both sides of the pier
Had been replaced with a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Robert Harrison asked: <br/><br/><br/>Lamp lit sadness lit the pier with intermitting light and dark hollows.<br />
The sea lapped at its wooden supports; like at dog at its water bowl.<br />
A concrete walkway had replaced the old worn noisy timbers<br />
A few weeks ago, even the top rails which ran both sides of the pier<br />
Had been replaced with a much broader top rails affording the<br />
Fishermen who frequented the pier, a resting place for their rods,<br />
Evident by the notches cut by fish knives so that the rods held upright.<br />
Wide enough to cut up their bait and to scale their fish, Bream and<br />
Whiting when I the season, though the odd Flathead and Ray had been<br />
Known to frequent these waters around Wellington Point.</p>
<p>There was no moon, but dawn was not far off as the sky that canopied<br />
Morton Bay was a steely gray. A dark cloud blanketed South Stradbroke<br />
Island, stretching from one end of the island and away to cover North<br />
Stradbroke Island. The two sister islands and their cousins Morton and<br />
Frazer all claimed a place in the Guinness Book of records as being the<br />
Largest sand islands in the world. Darker still were the islands themselves,<br />
Just distinguishable by the tell tail lighter patches where sand mining had<br />
Taken place some ten years before, the trees that were planted to hide the<br />
Islands scars had not yet accomplished their healing powers.</p>
<p>Voices echoed across the water as two fishermen prepared their boat for a<br />
Days fishing. Their tones were not unpleasant to the ear, but seemed to<br />
Be a part of the very Bay itself, each complimenting the other. The tranquility<br />
Of the early morning, broken also by the steady purring of the boats outboard,<br />
As finally it pushed it along the deep-water channel, and on out into the open<br />
Bay. Intermittent flashing red and green lights marking their watery coarse<br />
Into deeper water.</p>
<p>Venus, the morning star shone bright over South Stradbroke, and trailing behind<br />
Her came The Little Dog Star, Procyon, and a faithful companion from time<br />
Immemorial. Like the early morning walkers upon the earth they take their walk<br />
Along the same pathway in the sky. Now in the early morning she is queen of all<br />
She surveys, outshining all in her glorious majesty, her subjects dimming in abeyance.<br />
Soon, Sol in all her glory will rise from her slumber, her appearance foreshadowed<br />
By the golden rays of her tiara, edging the quilted clouds with brilliant silver and<br />
Gold stitches, then shooting upwards like half opened fans of transparent golden silk.<br />
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